Thursday, November 12, 2009

Chapter 1

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Alexandre is doing chapter one.

Anonymous said...

Characters: Jonas, his father, his mother, Lilly, Jonas' best friend Asher.

In this chapter we learn about a wired community. There are a lot of rules, one of them: Every body must ride a bike. You have to be eight years old to be able to ride a bike.

During his day, Jonas hear a noise on the top of his head. Nobody know what is it and the a voice said to everybody to go inside and to not staying in the street. Few minutes later the voice said again that it was just a pilot who was on the wrong way and that everything was cool.

Later in the afternoon, Jonas is sitting with his family for dinner. After that everybody have to talk about their feelings of their day.

Lilly, Jonas' little sister, say that she was upset because a boy didn't respected rules.
Jonas' father was frustrated because of something happens at his office. It was about a boy but we don't know too much about it.
And then Jonas said that he was anxious about the ceremony on december...

But what is about this ceremony? Just read the next summary!

Teacher said...

Teacher's corrected version Characters: Jonas, his father, his mother, Lilly, Jonas' best friend Asher.

In this chapter we learn about a weird community. There are a lot of rules,for instance here's one of them: everybody has to ride a bike. You have to be eight years old to be able to ride a bike.

One day, Jonas hears a noise on top of his head. Nobody knows what it is and the voice tells everybody to go inside and not to stay in the streets. A few minutes later the voice saays again that it was just a pilot who was on the wrong way and that everything was cool.

Later in the afternoon, Jonas is sitting with his family for dinner. After that everybody has to talk about their feelings of their day.

Lilly, Jonas' little sister, says that she was upset because a boy didn't respect rules.
Jonas' father is frustrated because of something that has happened at his office. It was about a boy but we don't know much about it.
And then Jonas says that he feels anxious about the ceremony in December...

But what is about this ceremony? Just read the next summary!

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